Feedback from the No Limits band task

For our task (create a mainstream band), we created a boy band called No Limits. We then presented the idea of our yo band to the rest of the class, and this is the response we received.

• Good in depth explanations and stories for the individual band members and characters.
• Good album artwork and poster.
• Impressive, appropriate release story for your artist/genre and good background story.
• Poster is really detailed and shows really well the characters behind each member. Very skilfully edited.
• Band name & album name are well thought out and appropriate. 
• Identities are successful.
• Great research.
• Too many band members?
• Don't think Jake belongs in the band.
• Could be a bit more consistent with clothes.
• Album cover is professional and fits well.
• Press release story is really good.
• Clothes and hair show good research and understanding
• Good to show social media (Twitter).
• More detail and explanation on appearance.
• Lots of thought and effort gone in.
• Good professional images but the band don't seem to fit well with each other.
• Colours look a bit reggae.
• Too much variety in the group.
• Good font and background on image.
• Band members don't fit together.
• Good album cover and idea.
• Twitter page inventive and good.
• Great scandal and top notch music video concept.
• Great picture!
• Good how you personalise each member.
• Generally fab!

Presentation/Blogs

• Could use more terminology.
• Could include a few more pictures, as some parts of the blog are too text heavy.
• Good info and depth but could be better if there were a few images to break it up.
• More text needed. Although visuals are good, the detail is a little thin in places.
• Good terminology

I believe in some cases that these evaluations are unfair or not required, for example, the comment Jake doesn't belong in the band. This comment was decided by his style, which was intentionally different to the other members, as all the styles were. 

However, I believe that the vast majority of comments are indeed correct and are something we can use in the future to achieve higher marks on other tasks.